Becoming (Story) Comments
It was dark,
I was immersed in a fluid world,
so small within its depths.
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babies are buds of the universe great story of mankind / well done thanks to share
Wonderfully well written, uninhibited & vivid.How very meaningful are subtle references, like '....had 'known' about the concept of eternity, it was gradually slipping away....' and again '....beyond a timescale which is incomprehensible to mankind, I would return to my origins...' Simply superb, Val.
Valerie, please dont stop write, because your work always make people smile and it more than a poetry or write, it delivers meaning in a beautiful array of words..loved it_Soul
We all have wondered what Life is all about and where we have come from? This is a wonderfully well written attempt to answer or simplify those questions. Was this all your own work Val? If so it is a credit to your creative talents.
Love is the binding force that holds everything together and repels anything which attempts to disturb its purpose This line pretty much sums up everything, it is a Grand Line in this Grand Story, your vivid imagination is your creativity unmatched.....
God is creator, and has made Man creative, this Becoming is the proof of your knowledge, observation, imagination and creative faculties!
What a well told story You have the gift. Really enjoyed the ride. Thanks for sharing BB : O)
Yea, it has been a long journey from ovulation to conception, from womb to warmth and from extraction to resurrection! ! Avidly read the whole thing! Your instinctive knowledge of love, your fondness for the rose flower..... all described beautifully as part of your becoming! No wonder whenever I think of you, I associate you with that smiling amber tinted rose flower! Rooted in the stars, you carry the glitter and sheen of a star! Val, what brilliance! !
Poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty in words., and you always bring the best from the worst...I am a fan ma'am...the story well.... Perfect...............
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7/23/2025 8:37:02 PM # 1.0.0
Excellent! Stunning beautiful this story of life. Powerful, it taught my soul awareness, deep thoughts, consciousness! Yes indeed it is love that brought us on this world, and love shall be our most treasured crop. To seed, to grow than freely share. Like flowers scent of beauty, you dear Valerie, shared the scent of love, thank you!