Becoming One Comments
As you lay here beside me
I can see beyond your smile
Your heart, the normal charm you have
Is lost here for a while,
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A delicate romantic poem so beautifully penned! Liked the lucidity of poetic expression! 10
Touches of love so nicely penned that it becomes a touching poem.
Beautifully expressed. 'Through our touch trace our thoughts' 10+
Grace full expression of such powerful feelings. Lovely poem, cant find enough words to express my feelings right now after reading this. Beautiful.
Thank you so much Ashika for your words, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem so much
A true heart warming poem, absorbingly beautiful. Despite that heart is lost here for a while, this poem is created. This poem shows great positivity and inner power. Sarah, only a most sensitive heart spiritually crafted, is able to write these words, is able to describe this poem. about true love. Thank you for sharing this tender Beauty in Becoming One.
oh.. I almost forgot.. your 'Becoming One' could be a good poem for the collection 'Our Chains, Our Dreams - Part 2.' - what do you think? Let me know
This sounds good, thank you. Please email me with the info Fabrizio
A lovely poem displaying to me beautifully the bonding nature of love. Thank you Sarah
Know not why it feels me a relation between mother and child. And the expression quiet straight to expose the heart honestly at least for once in lifetime. Nice radiation indeed. Thanks.
A charming poem on a loving unification that actually scripts this poem. Congratulation that this truly deserving poem has been selected as the poem of the day.
A most beautiful love poem, deservedly Poem Of The Day. Congratulations! I invite you to read some of my poetry, Sarah.
Becoming one in entirety. Strong words on the essence of unity and love. Great poem! Sylva.
Congratulations, well deserved! ! ! emotins ten deep in this poem very gentle with a sweet passion.
Fantastic poem.... I quote some crafty lines....10++++ I touch your face Trace your lips with my eyes The dark handsome ruggedness
Smile, mile! With the muse of true love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you all for your encouraging comments. It's wonderful when others share in the joy of the poetry we create.
This poem is really very lovable. Heart carries charming hopes to share love around us. Warmness of love sparks light of wisdom. This is very interesting sharing.10
It's a dedication to immortal love. Congrats for being the member's PoD. hanks for sharing the wonderful poem.
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7/27/2025 2:16:56 PM # 1.0.0
Like the song of the humming bird Our souls hold one tune The rhythm lifts our spirits Like the scent of fine perfume. wonderful poetic sense. becoming one is heavenly.