Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Becoming One Comments

Rating: ★4.5

I weave you into my poetry.
Your thoughts entwine with mine
Creating a tapestry of old ideas
Presented in the freshness of new love.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 July 2015

Enjoyed this much, young lady...Your structural movement is virtually flawless compliments of crisp, tight linage that wraps from one line to the next mellifluously...Stellar crafting ~FjR~

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Suzanne Hayasaki 22 July 2015

Thank you very much for this wonderful compliment!

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
Suzanne Hayasaki
Suzanne Hayasaki
Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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