Becoming Of Woman Comments

this is phenomenal i'm awed

What's to come is for me to know And this light danced inside Has overcome and dark subsides I see it straight, I see it clear Beauty outlooks coming years I never thought the sky divined Never thought the present mine Now I find from past destroyed reality is your intention and pasion what I felt in your poetry, specially in this poem and what you exppressed here about the woman's life cycle is very true and heart feeling.. logic and plea is impressive... appreciate your task..keep it on

I see it straight, I see it clear Beauty outlooks coming years I never thought the sky divined Never thought the present mine.....yes indeed it is so divine and takes years to come.. read mine watching helplessly..yes to to and you go alone....

This is very deep, wise, and sooooooooooooo true. Your emotions and feelings come through strong here as does your faith. A 10+++++ Love & hugs, Barbara