Becoming Before Dying Comments
Why do I sweat out in damned bars
Seeking out friends to loneliness?
My lost life is worth so much more!
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Forget the bars, they leave you in the lurch. You can find all the friends you need in church.
I'm simply using literary licence. But I get your message, Belle. And Thank You kindly for the advice. Merry Christmas!
I've known people whose first home is the bar. None improved their lives.
David, I still know some. And you are correct...none are improving their lives. So tragic, because some of them have so much potential.
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8/8/2025 1:42:09 PM # 1.0.0
Evil disguise and Satan comes from all corners. To keep faith is Almighty is the only way out. Excellent poem.
I am in total agreement with your wisdom, Dr Nehal. THX so much for your positivity!