Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Becoming An Adult Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyone said we would grow up someday
They said we would make it through the rough times, we would be okay
Yet, they forgot to mention the overwhelming stress we would face
And that sometimes school education could feel like a waste
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Abhinav Baruah 03 April 2010

I appreciate the theme.. good one!

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BEAU GOLDEN 26 March 2010

I feel that this poem is the first to begin to describe and visualize while u emote. Keep it up. You don't have to post everything you write (unless it makes u feel good) but read some of the visual imagery i have created and use that to paint pictures with your words. ~beau

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Iron Panda 23™ 25 March 2010

friffin magnifitastic! !

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