Sunday, February 17, 2008

Becoming Comments

Rating: 5.0

Painful, bleeding, screaming, calling, crying, when you're becoming.
Uttering, murmuring, yelling, drinking, when you're becoming.
Changing fast, slowly aging, heart burning fire when you're becoming.
Pale skinned, blood red to blue eyed, when you're becoming.
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David Beckham 05 August 2010

I have being thinking of doing something like this. Its great to see someone is already doing that. Its very clever and very appealing. Your thoughts came through to me.Good rhythm to it. Good job

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