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A rose bud still, not yet a rose.
A gawky awkward teenager
but she will blossom as she grows
and make me proud she’s my daughter.
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Ben Gieske 24 April 2008

Ivor, a great read. We don't quite forget, but I am sure that we don't quite remember how it really was and then, these days, are so much harder I believe for teenagers. We had it much easier. It took me a much longer time to grow out of my teenage attitude.

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John Thorkild Ellison 03 December 2007

Very pleasing, very well expressed. Thanks, John.

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Ernestine Northover 21 November 2007

I remember it well Ivor. Glad it's all over though. Very enjoyable read and a really good flow to move along to. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 21 November 2007

Something we all go through in the teen years, nice reminder Ivor! ! *10 *! ! !

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