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Will there be a sun
That truly shine through
The grey clouds
Burning them until the sky is blue
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4) the warmer Jan, the hopeful new year days.., everything melts down into the much-anticipated company of "you". Very nice.5* and MyFavourites..
3) " It doesn't matter neither way "… the double negative in the line accentuates eagerness of the poet to escape the cold depressive days of December and to welcome the warmer January. That is really poetic.
2) " the dreary days of December…made me melancholy.." but the warmer days of January with a New Year Promise are close by..
Beautiful. "..a sun..that shine through.. the grey clouds.... burning them until the sky is blue".. exquisite, LeeAnn...
New year brings a lot of hopes. We kinda wish that things would change for the better. They might not change but there's nothing wrong in hoping. And maybe if we change, the world will look new and different as well. Beautiful and natural!
The sun can always assert its way through the dark clouds to give its light to humanity. A very inspiring poem beautifully expressed.Thank you for sharing, LeeAnn.
Amazing poem, you are very right, dear LeeAnn: it was too good to not share.. I enjoyed this loveliest poem and amazing poem tremendously. Top Marks for you. TFS
Great title and great poem, LeeAnn! Glad that you shared it with us!
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5) and Congratulations, LeeAnn. This poem ranks #57 in the list of best poems of members. May it rise to the top