Monday, November 21, 2005

Become My Thirst Comments

Rating: 5.0

This longing
is as fine as porcelain
irridescent in the morning light.
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Anthony Dalby
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Don Mcwilliams 13 March 2008

Anthony, This is lyrically elegant, a spot-on description of desire. Don

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Hayley Lewis 14 June 2007

Never have so few words touched me in the way this poem did. Hay

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Patricia Gale 22 February 2006

Romantic. love the line become my thirst. Love Patricia

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Fox Nekitsune 28 November 2005

My thirst is quenched, I hope you find yours.

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