Beckon To Me Comments

It’s so sad how we can louse our way. Where there was fire, there are just embers and smoke, Quieted angst and little hope. A turning point, a wish for better things to come, A bittersweet yearning, known to about just everyone. I love the depth and.10/10 Thank you, I enjoyed. Warmest Regards Pat.

The emotions of this poem are honest and forthcoming... I liked it very very much, Best CJ

Great poem. Gave it a ten. I especially enjoyed the line about awaken the drowsy heart. God bless all poets-MJG.

Lovely title that compliments the sense of love, love lost, longing and a re-kindling of passion. Nice gentle flow to this too Vallerie. Justine

Am new member also, but my instinct urge me to give a 10 also because you poem expresses emotion that are real. A woman in love can love again, and again a man who of her dreams. He may not noticed her at first but soon realized that love was just near! . great write! I enjoyed reading it too. Regards.