Becker was sitting on the steps
in the final moments of day-
catching fireflies with his fingers,
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Very stylized. Your imagery and comparisons are amazing. Your words flow through my mind with as much grace as god can allow. Keep it coming.
Amberlee, you are a Goddess of words! Do I have to pray to thee?
I loved this so much. I just love the ending, the imagery and metaphors are beautiful.
This poem shot across my brow like a flashbulb comet. I stand and applause it aloud. It leaves a blue dot in my vision which will last for a long time. Like mentholatum on sore limbs. Great!