Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Because You Would Smile... Comments

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Because you would smile,
The high sky dispatched some clouds
To descend and stay above your head,
So that your smile wouldn't soon be dead.
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Khairul Ahsan
smile woods Oceans october
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Beach Girl 15 October 2014

Brilliant! I love the way you conveyed your thoughts, it was very touching and romantic

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2020

Appreciate your kind words, @Beach Girl. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

A fantastic poem with beautiful lines........ But alas! Despite all these, you didn't smile. So the clouds precipitated, the baby resumed Its fits of cries, the thunders roared and the Lightnings flashed, and the moon ball eclipsed. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2020

Thanks for quoting lines from my poem.Your appreciation is always an inspiration, @Geetha Jayakumar!

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Anupa Subramanian 12 October 2014

Beautiful..pure words and sentiments

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2020

Appreciate your kind words, dear poet Anupa Subramanian.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2014

Smiling Poem is very beautiful.Keep on writing.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2020

Thank you for the inspiration, dear poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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