when you were busy sleeping,
the enemy planted the seed
the seed of destruction
the seed of discord
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We are a vineyard, when we don't keep the vine active in God the enemy plants the bad seeds of condemnation and corruption.
You have great analytical skills of poems dear poetess Susan. Thank you once more.
Great poet Dr Dillip K S, I feel elated and humble to have your comments on my work. Thank you.
Thank you ma'am Susan. Your comments are always appreciated.
I appreciate poetess Susan. She has put here an excellent comment. I have no power to go beyond it....5 stars.
I like the use of repetition in this piece--it 'enhanced' the feeling of evil intent of the enemy who lives to sow discord and hatred---a stunning novel approach and an extremely im, portant topic---5 star rating and putting on my fav list--thank you for writing and sharing this piece
Thank you dear poet Anjandev Roy.