Monday, September 26, 2005

Because You Wear Gold Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun coming through
A straw hat
Once I had money
Now it is lost
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Frank Bana
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Sandra Fowler 31 July 2007

Excellent write. The last line is especially poignant and meaningful. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Preeti - is here! 24 July 2006

I don't think i got the meaning. does it mean we judge person by their physical wealth? Preets

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Pia Andersson 24 July 2006

Oh this is beautiful - sometimes when I find that a poem have a special beauty I dont want to worry about why, iI will let it be Your poem is painfully beautfiul -Pia

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Ruby Root 07 July 2006

Hi Frank, I think money is not a big concern with people. It is there to survive. If someone only likes you for what you have they are not much of a person. Unless I read your poem wrong but this is how I interpreted your poem. Let me know. Excellent poem and take care.

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