Thursday, October 9, 2008

Because You Told Me... Comments

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Because you told me something,
very secret,
about yourself,
i can no longer love you,
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Sandra jacks
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Kara Towe 23 December 2011

I could very much relate to this piece. Glad you are safe guarding yourself, obviously what ever the story was must not have been a good one, and revealed something harmful. I'm glad that the truth came out, and you were able to heed the warning. We are the company we keep. Great poem.

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Miranda Van Yperen 14 July 2009

i really like it :) good job

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 October 2008

beautifully penned. nice flow.........10

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Robert Quilter 09 October 2008

I enjoyed filling in the blanks.i like the honesty

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