Thursday, June 28, 2007

Because You Loved Me Comments

Rating: 2.9

I am stronger because you've made me this way.
I've learned to laugh, to love.
Learned to endure hardships,
strive to achieve excellence.
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Amanda Lukas
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Alison Cassidy 14 July 2007

I followed Nimal's lead to find you Amanda and I'm glad I did. This is a most uplifting poem of appreciation for someone who matters in your life. It is unpretentious and honest and filled with simple joy and optimism. The lines: I've learned to chase my dreams rather than chasing rainbows and butterflies.' stand out for me. Beautiful sentiments. love, Allie xxxx

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Nimal Dunuhinga 09 July 2007

Yes Amanda love teaches you more things than love.

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Glaedr the poet 28 June 2007

Very Nice! It puts a positive twist on the negatives that always seem to accompany love. But I'm a little confused...is the intent aimed at parental love or a failed relationship? I can actually see it as relating to both.

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