If I couldn't love you and wear your ring
The wind would stop blowing and the birds couldn't sing
If I couldn't love you, the sky couldn't be so blue
And the waves would stop as if on cue
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Nice sentiment, Donna, but I feel you could enhance the expression. Hope you don't mind me saying so. And thanks for your comment on my poem. Best wishes, Gina.
great job, enjoyed reading this poem and some others you have done,
congrats, thanks for sharing