Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Because You Love Me Comments

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If I couldn't love you and wear your ring
The wind would stop blowing and the birds couldn't sing
If I couldn't love you, the sky couldn't be so blue
And the waves would stop as if on cue
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Donna Nimmo
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 08 August 2009

congrats, thanks for sharing

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Gina Onyemaechi 27 November 2006

Nice sentiment, Donna, but I feel you could enhance the expression. Hope you don't mind me saying so. And thanks for your comment on my poem. Best wishes, Gina.

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Howard Johnson 28 February 2006

great job, enjoyed reading this poem and some others you have done,

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