I'm weak to stand
But i cant be rude to turn away
I'm weak to hear
But you only curious questioning all
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Soul, We must all walk upon the best path that lies before us. And when choices present themselves, we must follow that which seems best. At times, is true, others that we care for may be left behind. But along the path of discovery only one path can remain true. Though your feelings may remain sad, you have expressed them in a majestic manner.
A Very Emotionally Felt Poem From Line To Line! ! ! ! ! With Such Power And Strength Behind! ! ! ! ! How Deeply... An Movingly... Written! ! ! ! ! Very Very Powerful One To Readers Hearts! ! ! ! ! And Your Notes On This...Is... Praise God! ! ! ! ! Amen! ! ! ! ! Thank You Soul, Ever So Much For Sharing This Incredible Poem! ! ! ! ! ...... Beyond 10S! ! ! ! !
Sometimes our path we walk is so very different and difficult for anyone to understand. Sometimes the person needs to walk in the same shoes to achieve any comprehension of our lives and where we are coming from. Sometimes silence is the only answer.
If only the human race would stop judging each other and instead actively vividly love each other. Is it so hard to be kind? You'd think so by the amount of cruelty shown even here on PH. Arrogance and self-love seems to motivate some of the comments made that must hurt the recipient. Fortunately these unkind people here are in the minority. We are here to write and learn to write better and encourage others to do the same. Being judged on a personal level is even more damaging, I think. It is hard to remove ourselves from the harping snip-snip-snip of some people's hurtful tongue but if it's coworkers or family or spouses, we are in a huge quandary and I can only recommend prayers for guidance. You have brought this situation to painful life, Soul, may God guard and strengthen the hearts and souls and minds of the bullied. A well-written and valuable poem revealing the desperation and pain of such abominable treatment.. Blessings, dear Soul ...
a poem that explains about how we are all different in our thoughts? ...................understandably well written.
Wonderful poem as always Soul, our species is far too intolerant and judgmental for it's own good sometimes.
Hi dear, where have you been? i was wondering where were u my friend :) Its okay since we know we deal with people who dont have understanding we shouldnt argue, because they dont know...let them and let we try to move on with this hardship...no choice dear...we have to
You are weak to stand and weaker to hear but you can still hear voice of freedom and you are now stronger enough. Surviving with perfect answer you satisfy mind with nice judgement. Resonance of the words challenges. In silence feeling soul gives nice idea to overcome from hurting and pain. Distance from such hurting is wise and innocence blooms with thoughts. An interesting sharing is done here....10
Thank you dear, i think since people wont understand what we are having, we shouldnt beg for them to do so, instead we should understand what they think and what situation...we are the engine for the boat...i guess, thanks for your time Sir
The emotions and feelings are really flowing in this gem. The words 'bullets sharp words' will stay with me. I had to pause and reread several times. A great work, Soul.
Hi Dear, i dont know if it was good it just i feel so bruised...like its hurt but you have more things to do in your life than reacting, it is to lead your life the right path that you feel free and blessed..I feel blessed because so many friends here know me better than many out there, because here is always part of me that i never show..and friends like you are remedy, that heal without you see where my bruises are...and my thoughts always be somewhere in firework when no one see when i smile..I pray to God for you and to all my precious friends here...a great life, if past wasnt then must be from now and then... :) thanks dear
Feelings and musing expressed so well here. I like the super wording too ESP how u used resonance and the bullets in metaphor as well. Don't care what people say or think as long as u r doing right. Thumbs up. So nice to read from u again.
Yes dear, sometimes i ignore...it just we have strength that weaken day by day and when we reach at the weakest point we may fall too...so thats what i have faced, but to recover is by looking all the options and stay in sober...not by emotion, then we will do right things. Thank you for supporting me, appreciate that :) ..Yes been a while since we have talking, take care and be happy okay :)
Thank you Zaynub, i wish you have greater days and stronger to face life..may happiness on your side
Include all of us.. give us wisdom, patience, faith, strength, and great understood to be content... Amen. you explained the situation in a nice and humble way. one can't learn to live in a million ways to satisfy a million, but one and judgment... it will be, in wait.
Thank you for your support, strong words...maybe its not necessary for me to tell about the background of why i wrote this poem, but i just want to tell sometimes that like other people i do have difficult times and it is okay, it is okay because this is human life nothing is so smooth...Yes my dear, my prayers are for all friends too..you all are my bones when i down and i dont want any of you feel down too...so lets be strong together and less angry to what we have facing, instead be wiser to face all challenges, May God bring us the best way as He blessed..for all of us..Amen.
A very insightful social outlook. It seems an outcome of humanist belief. A wave of sincerity can be felt in it. Thank you very much,