Thursday, July 28, 2005

Because, You Are My Life....... Comments

Rating: 4.8

The stars are bright in the sky
The moon sails through the sky
The cold breeze freezes my body
and the nights are hurting me without your love
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 April 2010

Full of YOU and YOUR …a poem of offering and with oozing of Love… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sallie Howson 28 July 2005

beautiful touching poem without being soppy..well done

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 28 July 2005

Very good Ravi! 'I am not a great poet...' But, YOU sure write like one!

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