Because We Deserve It. Comments

I really like this, it's a great piece. I like that it's lyrical, and sounds strangely commercial. You sell feeling good like marketers sell looking good, which is a nice twist. Good job.

A fantastic piece of advice in this aesthetic, synthetic era. A 'make-over heart' - I like it. 'So let's work inside-out' is a wonderful line. This poem is wise, lyrical and innovative - I thoroughly enjoyed it. S :)

Hi Fay. I like yourself feel we all deserve to feel great, and you certainly should having written such a good piece, a well deserved 10 from me. Regards Dave.

Fay what a great piece of work this is, too often people pretend, what are sleeves for if not for hearts. regards Tom 10+