Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Because Of You Comments

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Why can’t you see
What you’ve done?
Once I had a father
And now I have none
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Allyson Gordon
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I remember the letter you were gonna sent 'him.' You should hav sent that poem... It not only draws a picture of the pain and agony he's caused you. But it also gives sound effects and a narrator telling the viewer of how you really feel... But then again he'd still probably get confused and not understand. Brilliant poem babez. Keep writing xo

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Allyson Gordon

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