Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Because Of You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I traveled all around the world I knew what I would find Someone half as smart Someone half as sweet someone half as kind.
I could have all the money and cars or whatever in my life to choose
It wouldn't even quite compare To what I've got right here with you.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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