Because Of You Comments

amazing story and context! ! ! this would make a hit song; -) really nice flow! 10/10! ! congratz!

It's aweso0o0o0o0me, , ur way in telling us this story is really touching, , nice poem :)

Very Nice. Its like you are telling a story and i got so much involved in it. Sad it is though. Good.

this is great.. i can feel the sadness. keep on writing..

nice abstract poem....touching................10+++

A Very sad write with many emotions sweetie Have you ever heard the Song Because Of you By Reba and Kelly Clarkson it is a very good song Great write My friend Melissia Ann

WOW! love this poem, i relate to it too. Each line shows more and more emotion. Powerful stuff! ! !

I feel guilty You were happy Because of me I wish I can take back that day ... i still miss u and weep some time that is what is attachment... lovley phan u r more than poetess dear....10 read mine bidding farewell.... mary to marry and you go along

Christina, your hearts words are so touching...each line inked with your regret for this love....I hope he gets to read this...tenderly penned hearts share

i can so relate to this pain...10+++++

a sad poem about pain and the hope of getting out of it.

this is very touching... i like it..

because of you, i never stay too far from the sidewalk..i remember a song..this is a good poem..nicely done..grace

That's touching, it reminders of my own. 10.