Thursday, September 13, 2007

Because Of This Wall Comments

Rating: 5.0

the night is a,
beautiful time,
it's a time when,
noone can see,
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Kat , sorrow 14 January 2009

This is a wonderful poem. thank you. Love, Kat sorrow

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Tyease Collins 23 June 2008

Beautiful. I love the metaphors. I love this poem so much ♥ **Tyease**

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2008

another break in the wall is what you gotta get.nice write and great efforts.10 for this.

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Make A Wish 05 April 2008

: O wow it is amazing! ! ! i thought i was bad, but this is worse than me, and brought out in better writing than i could ever write! ! ! ! you are WONDERFUL!

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Keyra King 08 March 2008

! ! ! ! MAN! ! ! ! ! ! this poem is amazeiing your detail used to describe the fact that know gets you and no one knows you is amazeing this poem is one of a kind only a true poet can write like that! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Katie Windon 01 February 2008

WOW, this was an amazing poem. It gave me goose bumps because it did an amazing job describing what it feels like to be completely finished with the world and with life. This poem really goes deep inside the soul peeling back so many layers being fully exposed to true emotion. Truly amazing poem. Keep on writing!

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Lilly Mandrell 21 October 2007

I really like this poem. I know how that feels.

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Linda Izundu 10 October 2007

wow I really love this poem

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Hali Curtis 29 September 2007

Is there anyway I could save u...I'll risk my life!

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cool poem i like it!

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jazmine kristen 13 September 2007

can I resuce u? ? ..................

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