the night is a,
beautiful time,
it's a time when,
noone can see,
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Beautiful. I love the metaphors. I love this poem so much ♥ **Tyease**
another break in the wall is what you gotta get.nice write and great efforts.10 for this.
: O wow it is amazing! ! ! i thought i was bad, but this is worse than me, and brought out in better writing than i could ever write! ! ! ! you are WONDERFUL!
! ! ! ! MAN! ! ! ! ! ! this poem is amazeiing your detail used to describe the fact that know gets you and no one knows you is amazeing this poem is one of a kind only a true poet can write like that! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
WOW, this was an amazing poem. It gave me goose bumps because it did an amazing job describing what it feels like to be completely finished with the world and with life. This poem really goes deep inside the soul peeling back so many layers being fully exposed to true emotion. Truly amazing poem. Keep on writing!
This is a wonderful poem. thank you. Love, Kat sorrow