Saturday, April 18, 2015

Because Of Sin Comments

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What if instead of having men and women,
The earth would have been inhabited by humans,
Having both the sexes in them,
Many funny situations would have been arisen.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 April 2015

It’s my sin that introduced God to me! I cry, I pray, forgive me my God, I know I shall commit this sin once again, And you will forgive me again and again.........God will forgive but don't commit sin, go on divine line. A beautiful poem with great write. Many thanks Jawad sir. Many thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 30 April 2015

Don't worry Akhtar ji! To err is human... to forgive divine!

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Bisma Mirza 20 April 2015

Great! ! ! ! really Awesome..10 on 10

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Khalid Saifullah 19 April 2015

An interesting poem, thoughtful as well..................10

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