Friday, November 6, 2009

Because Of Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken glass and shattered lives
these words you hurl at me like knives
Each words rips at my heart
every insult a poisoned dart.
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Chloe Coleman
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Adeline Foster 06 November 2015

Sounds like you have had It, this time at least. Read mine - lies - Adeline

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Vic Bassetti 06 November 2009

Very good poem but one line was so creative you made me make an account so i could comment 'He'll find that daggers now replaced, he'll see a sword tied to my waist.' really creative when i read it i couldn't help but smile: P

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I'm me 06 November 2009

Great expression, and good to see that you have confidence (unlike so many people these days) . Keep writing; your poetry is good! -Cheng

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Allan O 06 November 2009

intense..hurtful..depressing...emotional anger...great write Chloe... be careful ~^..^

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