Broken glass and shattered lives
these words you hurl at me like knives
Each words rips at my heart
every insult a poisoned dart.
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Very good poem but one line was so creative you made me make an account so i could comment 'He'll find that daggers now replaced, he'll see a sword tied to my waist.' really creative when i read it i couldn't help but smile: P
Great expression, and good to see that you have confidence (unlike so many people these days) . Keep writing; your poetry is good! -Cheng
intense..hurtful..depressing...emotional anger...great write Chloe... be careful ~^..^
Sounds like you have had It, this time at least. Read mine - lies - Adeline