Thursday, May 12, 2011

Because Of All Of You Comments

Rating: 5.0

My body lies there cold and alone trying to fight every bit of this disease I have inside of me
My hands tremble at the thought that I’m being attacked and intruded by something I cannot see
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 May 2014

A simplistic write, with such power that sways the mind...great work

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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windsor, ontario
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