Because of winds,
Because of a rain rest,
Because of a swallow... yet
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Dear Tsira, well done. I painted this picture in my mind and liked it. Konstantin. P.S. I liked you joke about arithmetic. 'It's difficult for me to count 100, so, I'd better eat you...'
Very moving. Your elegant poem deserves much praise. 10/10. Warm regards, Sandra
...because of Tsira.....the meaning of the day is today and the essence of tomorrow is to feel each poem you've made.....its good start to reflect and a nice day to smile with your poem of saying the goodbye of what was yesterday.....i like your poem...thank you and God bless my friend
nature love that symbolizes humanity............profound poem...10+++
Bronze upon the wall, a crown is....to sparrow watch, feathers soft, eyes keep, inside Hellenise horse....iip
A nice reflective poem Tsira, a pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew
Plaiting a crown of camomiles sounds lovely Tsira.....10 + ++ from Fay.
'I'll sit in the middle of a rainbow, What to plait by camomiles a crowns.' Wonderful short soft poem with rich metaphor. Your work is always lovely. My :) 10 with it.
Wonderful imagery. Because, the bridge of rainbow - Has not disappeared yet as a dream, CP
nice imagery vivid and yet a shade sad.. nice stuff cheers