. Because Now There Is No 'Us' Comments

Lovely, with just enough sadness to make me cry. Its seems dry though; i was also confused by the lack of puncuation.

oh don't we all wish the joys of love could be forever... absolutely lovely work dear

I agree with John, add tune to this one, it will sound nice.I like the fact that you've kept the words simple! Preets

Why indeed Kay - it's so sad that it just doesn't last forever - or is it because... Take care. Joey

puno ng emosyon.. maganda ang pagkakabuo.. i can feel the emotion of the poem.. just hope both of you can resolve it soon.. best wishes my dear.. =)

so powerful words yet so simple, it flows thru the veins, you'll feel the chill inside. i felt guilty in me, im so sorry.

sing like a song. good kay.