Sunday, January 20, 2008
Because Nothing Wants To Die… Comments
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I lose everything in the end,
when the lights are turned out and my tongue dries.
Hanging by the skin of my teeth,
I can’t hold onto the rope that twists above the quicksand
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Ted Sheridan
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Tara very irritated with PH injustice
21 January 2008
Sigh. So true. You take your reader into a journey of decline.... I'm not sure whether the last lines are tragically poignant in a positive, or in a negative, way.... either way the effect is keen. t x
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8/2/2025 5:18:49 AM # 1.0.0
A darkly brooding Alice in Wonderland trip down a scary personal rabbit hole. Your title explains it all. Your final lines tell you why. Great poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥