Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Because Jesus Is There Comments

Rating: 4.0

The donkeys brayed
And the pigs oinked
And the flies buzzed
On the walls lizards crawled
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Leslie Alexis
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Winston Harding 31 October 2011

Wonderful poem Alexis. Great write. I love the way you end it. Keep writing, you are a precious writer.

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Melanie Johnson 08 January 2010

Great idea girl! I'd go anywhere Jesus is. Thanks for sharing this poem!

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Christopher Shepheard 03 December 2009

A good idea well expressed.

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Honest Heart 10 October 2009

love it...........very nice :)

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Eyan Desir 25 September 2009

Make a song with this.. hehe 10ss

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Seema Chowdhury 25 September 2009

good poem and good question in the end. pl see some of my poems too.

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Jasmin Bell 22 September 2009

awsome poem rated it 10

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Tsira Goge 22 September 2009

Leslie, All would be ok, if not a question mark in the end. All the same 10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Carol Gall 22 September 2009

good poem leslie i like this one 10

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