Because It Cannot Be. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Because It Cannot Be.

Rating: 5.0


What is natural
What is deep
What belongs
To only us!
And that no one
Else can see,
Is this sad
And bitter love
That really shouldn't
Be.

That unifies our souls
But separates
The lives
Of you and me,
However, can that be?
A love that separates
Because it cannot be!

But even at a distance
You'll still belong to me
For I will always love you
Like the Night Moon
Loves the Sea,
With this love that is
Eternal, and the very
Soul in me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 March 2023

Every line of this poem depicts the strongest feeling of love that penetrates the heart and soul. So beautifully, lovingly and honestly expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 March 2023

A one of a kind poem of love. So powerful, deep and thought provoking that you can feel the frustration, sadness and agony of two souls who love each other but cannot be together.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2023

And...to my Favourites! Thank you for sharing this Beauty from your heart.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2023

A loveliest thought-provoking poem about the love that is not meant to be. Superbly weaved and presented. Top Marks from my heart!

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Nabakishore Dash 07 March 2023

Awesome love that is platonic in nature.

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Richard Wlodarski 06 March 2023

Rose Marie commented so eloquently and perfectly that I have nothing to add. May your Romeo be forever grateful for your love!

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M. Asim Nehal 06 March 2023

Your similes are par excellence. Liked your poem. Full *****

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 March 2023

Wonderful Sandra

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Sandra Feldman 08 March 2023

t is you who re wonderful, kind and caring. Thans so much for eadimg and greatmcomet

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 March 2023

Wonderful poem dear Sandra. The close bond of love remains steadfast and pure. Even if you are sparated the love remains like the night moon who never stops loveing the sea. True love is ever eternal., , , , ,10 + Favouriteom your lover

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