Monday, January 25, 2010

Because, I Love You Comments

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Truly
I hope I just had a dream,
But I don't see any stars.
And I wish that
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Sai Saketh Ram
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Terence George Craddock 25 January 2010

Hi Sai, I like this. But I don't see any stars. And I wish that I can tear myself in a scream. I put stars in several of my poems also but in the love poem Snowpowder mainly snow before the fowers of the final stanza. I will enjoy reading you more.

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