Thursday, May 13, 2010

Because I Love Him Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am Kairi.
Searching far and wide for Sora.
Because I love him.
I am a princess of heart.
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Kylee Bartz
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Manolo Del Toro 08 June 2010

THE SAVE HIS REAR END PART IS REALLY NOT NECESSARY. STICK TO REGULAR STUFF, YOU ARE MUCH TO TALENTED TO BE CRUDE.

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Ency Bearis 26 May 2010

A free thoughts with intent, well written self contemplation, nice works.

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Preetam Shetty 24 May 2010

Love expressed in words...good job

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Afzal Shauq 24 May 2010

am a princess of heart. My heart contains no darkness. So I know loving him is right. Sora is my everything. what a sweet, easy but very sweet way written verses are above..the whole poem is impressive, and yes what you think about love and lover is perfect in your tiny age..sure i will read your more poems too as you wished..lovely idea..10/10

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Celestine Moonlight 20 May 2010

I admire the way you write this poem. It is clear and straightfoward. I knew how is it to be in love. Sacrifices are needed and it depends on how willingly you give it.

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