Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Because I Love Her Comments

Rating: 4.8

Because I love her,
I will work neath the sun;
I will be the breadwinner,
Getting the nice job done.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Thomas Case 23 October 2023

Superb work

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2023

Because I love her, I'll be loyal and kind; Ignoring temptation, Never leave her behind....an endearing promise! A lovely poem dear poet.

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Susheela Alexiose 28 December 2021

wow! ! she is so blessed to have your in her life! ! ! May your love grow stronger as each day passes by..5 stars! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 September 2021

this poem has touched my heart with its poetic perfection

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2020

A magnificent piece of poetry... sparling poetic expression! One of your best poems...5 stars.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2020

Sweet poem. Tells beautifully what true devotional love is

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Khairul Ahsan 24 November 2020

Many may not agree that going to a 'grocery store' with our beloved on her request is a great act of love and sacrifice, but I do, knowing how bad one might feel when the request comes at a wrong time. Yet, to honor the request, leaving whatever one is busy with, is indeed a sacrifice made at the altar of love. A great poem, gets 5 Stars from me, the maximum!

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Gary James Smith 08 November 2020

Amen Bernie..a trip to the grocery store with our honey shows surely our deep love for them...ha ha

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 October 2020

Because I love Her.....is a wonderful poem that deserves to be read again and again. When you truly love someone, you will be kind, loyal, protective, ever ready to do any chores to help your spouse or your partner and embrace with warmth of your love. Great Poem, Bernard, that i truly enjoyed reading.....Top stars.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 November 2020

You have appreciated the poem so nicely, @Geeta!

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Suresh Kumar Ek 28 September 2020

The sicere love is artistically depicted

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Leeann Azzopardi 11 June 2020

this poem reminds me of pablo neudra. The dedication to true love Bravo!

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Gary James Smith 14 April 2020

Yes the utmost of sacrifices...going to the grocery store....definetly food for thought here...

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Anjandev Roy 27 March 2020

An excellent piece.....dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 January 2020

Beautiful write on theme love. Romantic with a jovial ending. Great rhyme scheme. And very nice refrain usage 10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

And a brilliant poem gets born Because I lobe her eve and morn... And let me thank poet mihaela Pirjol whose page helped me read this poem. Excellent poem, dear poet.

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Luz Hanaii 05 December 2019

This shows much appreciation and love for your wife, I'm sure she values all of your dedication. TFS

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 November 2019

This poem is well-constructed in wonderful stanzas of rhythm and melody: the repetition of 'because I love her' shows the depth of your love. Yes, this is a great poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 November 2019

Thank you so much, dear Ma’am Mihaela for the sweet and lovely comment🙏😊❤️

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Maxim Muyu 25 November 2019

nice composed poem, I like it.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2019

Love has no reason but it's reason of beauty everywhere.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 November 2019

Thanks, sir Akhtar for the wonderful comment🙏😊👌

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Nobody Stars 16 September 2019

interesting, but also scary, it reminds you of the opposite

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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