Monday, August 13, 2007

Because A Strong Woman, I Am Comments

Rating: 5.0

Indeed I still struggle
Swimming upstream with might
Never giving up on what I care for
Because a strong woman, I am
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Ana Monnar
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Miriam Ibarguengoitia 30 March 2018

I like very much Ana! ! !

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Souren Mondal 02 February 2016

'I am who I am, not just anyone to fit in I refuse to fit the mold and take the easy route Tenacity and endurance is what I hold Because a strong woman, I am' Very well crafted lines, and a very powerful poem.. Thank you for sharing.

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Lee Degnan 01 December 2007

And more power to you, girlfriend! Thank you for bearing the strength of a woman into this poem, women are strong creatures, their endurance in life is unmatched, and their spirit is what makes the world go round! And from one woman to another, you wrote a wonderful poem... Many thanks, Lee

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 09 September 2007

Ana - There is no price that can be put on the 'little things' we do every day for those we love. Some people can't understand the inner strength it takes. Never worry about other's opinions, only focus on how many ways you can continue to show your love, with and without words. Lovely poem - xxxCheryl

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Elya Thorn 09 September 2007

Great poem, very passionate, it has a certain energy and feel to it. I can defintly say I have been through this too... but in the end, it's the ppl who really know you, the ones who deserve your care, love and attention! Hugs, and thank you for the beautiful comment you left :) Never stop writing! Your friend, Elya Thorn

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Goldy Locks 09 September 2007

This reads very juvenile, to me. Like a young girl trying to impress her teacher. keep on SusxGLx

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Francesca Johnson 02 September 2007

Thank you for directing me here, Ana. This has to be one of the most powerful poems about womanhood I ever have read. Strength indeed! Love, Fran xx

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Denise F. 21 August 2007

i really like this poem..a declaration that you will not succumb to the expectations of others...very nicely written

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Scott Austin 20 August 2007

I commend you on madam on your writing, it shows how strong you really are as a women and a mother. The hurt is felt in this write but your strength is felt even more in your words. May your heart once again feel peace and joy that you deserve. Scott

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Alison Cassidy 19 August 2007

This is an excellent read with a strong rhythmic flow and some brilliant touches: 'Take a good look at your soul If what you see is perfection Then gently stroke your sharp tongue.' I admire you spirit, Ana. Your write with determination and passion. love, Allie xxxx

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Patricia Gale 19 August 2007

Outstanding piece! ! ! ! I commend you for your strength in not letting the sharp tongue drag you down... Every woman should read this! Top marks!

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Blue angel Florida 18 August 2007

HEY HEY! ! ! ! That's a great one! YES STRONG WOMAN! 'Glance at the mirror Take a good look at your soul..If what you see is perfection...Then gently stroke your sharp tongue'...Loved it! Thank you! Let's all 'ROAR' together :)

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Marci Made 17 August 2007

Well, you've convinced me....any extra strength to spare? ? ? ? . Another great write from you... Thinking of that song..>>> ' I AM WOMAN HEAR ME ROAR! ' marci. :) ~~

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Meggie Gultiano 16 August 2007

That's it, Ana! welcome to the club of strong woman(not physically though) Another excellent poem of yours..thanks for this. love and hugs, Meggie

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Charles Garcia 15 August 2007

Ana: Right on, read my 'essay about me' charles Garcia

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