Indeed I still struggle
Swimming upstream with might
Never giving up on what I care for
Because a strong woman, I am
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'I am who I am, not just anyone to fit in I refuse to fit the mold and take the easy route Tenacity and endurance is what I hold Because a strong woman, I am' Very well crafted lines, and a very powerful poem.. Thank you for sharing.
And more power to you, girlfriend! Thank you for bearing the strength of a woman into this poem, women are strong creatures, their endurance in life is unmatched, and their spirit is what makes the world go round! And from one woman to another, you wrote a wonderful poem... Many thanks, Lee
Ana - There is no price that can be put on the 'little things' we do every day for those we love. Some people can't understand the inner strength it takes. Never worry about other's opinions, only focus on how many ways you can continue to show your love, with and without words. Lovely poem - xxxCheryl
Great poem, very passionate, it has a certain energy and feel to it. I can defintly say I have been through this too... but in the end, it's the ppl who really know you, the ones who deserve your care, love and attention! Hugs, and thank you for the beautiful comment you left :) Never stop writing! Your friend, Elya Thorn
This reads very juvenile, to me. Like a young girl trying to impress her teacher. keep on SusxGLx
Thank you for directing me here, Ana. This has to be one of the most powerful poems about womanhood I ever have read. Strength indeed! Love, Fran xx
i really like this poem..a declaration that you will not succumb to the expectations of others...very nicely written
I commend you on madam on your writing, it shows how strong you really are as a women and a mother. The hurt is felt in this write but your strength is felt even more in your words. May your heart once again feel peace and joy that you deserve. Scott
This is an excellent read with a strong rhythmic flow and some brilliant touches: 'Take a good look at your soul If what you see is perfection Then gently stroke your sharp tongue.' I admire you spirit, Ana. Your write with determination and passion. love, Allie xxxx
Outstanding piece! ! ! ! I commend you for your strength in not letting the sharp tongue drag you down... Every woman should read this! Top marks!
HEY HEY! ! ! ! That's a great one! YES STRONG WOMAN! 'Glance at the mirror Take a good look at your soul..If what you see is perfection...Then gently stroke your sharp tongue'...Loved it! Thank you! Let's all 'ROAR' together :)
Well, you've convinced me....any extra strength to spare? ? ? ? . Another great write from you... Thinking of that song..>>> ' I AM WOMAN HEAR ME ROAR! ' marci. :) ~~
That's it, Ana! welcome to the club of strong woman(not physically though) Another excellent poem of yours..thanks for this. love and hugs, Meggie
I like very much Ana! ! !