Tuesday, April 2, 2013
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He has given brain to keep him in memory.
He has given two eyes to glimpse his glory.
He has given us the soul because we can feel him.
He has given two hands so that we do good deeds.
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7/23/2025 4:25:32 PM # 1.0.0
I like the idea of the poem, it's just that you repeat He has given over and over. Too redundant. He has given a brain to keep him in memory, two eyes to give Him glory. etc. Keep writing, and combine thoughts to make more sense - consolidate more in other words. Thank you for sharing your poetry. RoseAnn