Wednesday, November 25, 2020

Becalmed A Sailor's Death By Dehydration Comments

Rating: 5.0

the horizon stretches endless
in this millpond flat salt sea
no thirst quenching water to see
no creaked lip mercy will there be
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Terence George Craddock
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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 November 2020

Good one. No wonder the sailors wanted a colony when they landed. No way of even wanting to go back to Albion after landing at the Cape of Good Hope

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L Milton Hankins 25 November 2020

Wow! A truly fantastic piece of work. Outstanding imagery! While reading it I had the strong urge to drink a glass of pure, clean water. Nice work, Terence.

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