Sunday, February 11, 2007

Beauty Of The Moon And The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.8

Tonight is such so lovely
for I am sailing in the middle of the sea
ocean is, the thing i see
a good source of light, the moon shall be
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Verona Valentine
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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 August 2008

A lucid poem beckoning dreams.

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Alison Mary Dunn 17 November 2007

Hi Dahinee, the imagery you've created in this poem brings a feeling of beauty and calm, something we all need to learn how to find in times of trouble. I liked his very much! Ally; -)

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Tranquil Ocean 11 February 2007

You paint a lovely picture. TO

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