Beauty Of The Endless Night Comments

And as I have made my choice The gates shouted behind ‘There’s no way back’ said to me the voice Rachel Ann Butler

'Stars shall die earth will pass away And her beauty will always stay' Excellent write 10+++

beautiful tribute to dama, thanks for sharing 10

a very moving poem.very well composed

When one has experienced a love so deep, so passionate, that it verges on pain, then one can relate to the depth of brilliant poetry such as this. I was very very moved. Thank you Allan 10/10

What a beautiful poem, Allan! The flow and glow of its beauty is endless like the endless night. When there was nothing, there was night and there was love....10/10. Best Wishes. Naseer

This is indeed a gloomy portrait. But it is so filled with the passion of a great love it has a way of making it seem even more powerful and sustainable than the normal love blossoming in the light of day. I guess that was the intent. If so, it has succeeded. GW62

Honesty and frankness are the best elements for love and you got that elements Allan.Good love poem.

From the roots of the past The feeling that will forever last Stars shall die earth will pass away And her beauty will always stay -------- Beautiful lines indeed...a poem crafted so lovingly. Great imagery and fine rhymes were visible in this composition... To your Dama, the love of your life...everything will fade and pass away but her beauty and love will last through eternity.............10+++

Very Very Very Beautiful.. I'm impressed by it's words. Lovely. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. best wishes, ana