Saturday, May 12, 2018

Beauty Of The Destination (A Comment On Kelly Kurt's Poem Changing Places) Comments

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If I am a source of beauty I shall spring as flowers through my grave even deep
If I am in love and I am smiling I shall send my heart's heart beats as a beep
I know nobody will see me in the colors and aroma of a rose and it will end
I know nobody will listen to my beep but being a wave it has a trend
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2018

Muse of life! A source of beauty. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 May 2018

If I am in love and I am smiling I shall send my heart's heart beats as a beep....I am utterly fascinated with the stunning beauty of this line! Loved reading this beautiful poem! (10)

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A wonderful poem. So heartwarming. The first two lines of this poem are so moving. Liked the last two lines.10

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Kelly Kurt 12 May 2018

We are all from the same tree, equally beautiful. This brings me pride and joy!

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