Beauty Of The Destination (A Comment On Kelly Kurt's Poem Changing Places) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Beauty Of The Destination (A Comment On Kelly Kurt's Poem Changing Places)

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If I am a source of beauty I shall spring as flowers through my grave even deep
If I am in love and I am smiling I shall send my heart's heart beats as a beep
I know nobody will see me in the colors and aroma of a rose and it will end
I know nobody will listen to my beep but being a wave it has a trend
To go expanding in the endless space though its touch will be insignificant
For me it will be enough that it will touch anything that is left still so descent!
That's how I started thinking after reading Kurt's poem thoughtful
Don't know whether the hunter will be capable of hunting the words beautiful?
Suddenly a thought came in my mind if I and Kurt spring from the same tree
How louder would be our laughter, how excited we would be!

Beauty Of The Destination (A Comment On Kelly Kurt's Poem Changing Places)
Saturday, May 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,destination
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2018

Muse of life! A source of beauty. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 May 2018

If I am in love and I am smiling I shall send my heart's heart beats as a beep....I am utterly fascinated with the stunning beauty of this line! Loved reading this beautiful poem! (10)

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A wonderful poem. So heartwarming. The first two lines of this poem are so moving. Liked the last two lines.10

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Kelly Kurt 12 May 2018

We are all from the same tree, equally beautiful. This brings me pride and joy!

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