Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Beauty Of Senility - Ii Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I hover in my hoveround
My feet no longer tread the ground -
So nice to have a moving seat
My little world is now complete;
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Linda Ori
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Joscephine Gomez 02 June 2007

Words of consolation to those who feel old but oiled. May you always be oiled!

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Ted Sheridan 17 March 2007

If it were not so true I would laugh before I blow my brains out... LOL Are you sure we aren't all dead?

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Lola Cunningham 16 March 2007

Linda, this is absolutely a fablous poem! As I read your words, they proved a bit uneasy, thinking this is what we all may come to. Great write!

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Declan McHenry 16 March 2007

Love it Linda! A grand piece indeed.

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Not a member No 4 15 March 2007

As an over 50 I hope I qualify to laugh at this! It's all coming to us if we hang on long enough! Funny, sad, realistic, clever and as ever, very well written Linda. xx jim

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Gregory Gunn 15 March 2007

Continuing laughs from our humourous Linda. I particularly liked the 1st,2nd, and 8th stanzas the most. Not to put the pressure on you, but perhaps this could parlay into a whole 'Senility' series of poems? Thanks ever so much for the dedication. Today I peered in the mirror merely to find Four more gray hairs, fourteen crow's feet lines, Put in my teeth, applied a dab of Ben-Gay, Trimmed nasal hairs, adjusted partial toupee. Sat down to breakfast of prune juice and bran With hopes of becoming regular again, Attempted to read the Free Press daily news To no avail, my sight must make full use Of spectacles that magnify fine print, No matter how hard eyes ultimately squint, I just can't focus in on current events; Perhaps it's best this level of pretense. -Gregory Gunn

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Nimal Dunuhinga 14 March 2007

I feel the joy of being an old; that's sadness Nothing to repent Linda as you have seen the world and the people, Life is an accident........anyway you may long live! Best regards, fondly, nimal (I am in your native soil for the time being.)

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Barry Van Allen 14 March 2007

Linda, Sorry, I am just not buying that whole senility thing! ... well, not until you beam me up into your hoveround! I guess it all Depends on how much Poise you have, doesn't it ? B.V.A.

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fanniesson - 13 March 2007

i love it a poem right up my alley

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Cleverity and wit abound this most entertaining piece, Midnight.a BIT TO THE ECCENTRICAL & SURREAL TO BOOT...I AM QUITE IMPRESSED.... Not that i dinot know you had the skill to venture there, as but of course you always did...just haven't seen it in writin' til now & im lovin' it, lassie! Frank

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