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When a bud became a rose,
vigorous dreams flooded the heart glee
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A beautiful poem. 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, ' Loved this line.
quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, In 7 years you write of the mystery that fear blocks love. the glimmer becoming the fire is also very beautiful. Allah has given you your pen.
Hmmm...i can tell its alot going on in this poem, maybe a little too much going on in this poem, but i love the power and beauty in your choice of words. Very nice :)
a poem 2 read over and over. nice words, powerful art piece. i love dis line 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love'', i will love 2 read more of u work.
it is brilliant........the flow of words the well pinned lines..they are just amazing thank you for sharing sir payal
Powerful lines and a theme well moulded into a poem.. Could have been a little longer by 6-8 more lines, I feel.Thank u for sharing.Please check ur inbox for my msg.
awesome.. nice proses and flowing lines and wonderful words, used in this marvelous poem. muchas gracias for sharing~nb
One can thing of the strength of this poem after reading it. The words sound very strong like the message of the poem. Most words are used metaphorically and that makes it interesting for the readers. Very Matured.
like an abstract piece of art the picture z pregnant with so many ideas, different shades and strokes enhance its beauty....... full of meaning and widen perception......... like to read this matured piece of art
A very abstract, colourful, explosion of words embracing the reader! Liked this poem!
i like your poem, your words giving the new meanings after every reading
Hmm an intense poem but i admire d ambiguity. Esp liked how u say, 'burst into fire of gaiety'.
Very strong images are being expressed here, forming deep thought in life. Thanks for sharing.
A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.