Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Beauty Of Rose Comments

Rating: 3.5

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When a bud became a rose,
vigorous dreams flooded the heart glee
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Musfiq us shaleheen
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Chinedu Dike 29 July 2019

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2013

A beautiful poem. 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, ' Loved this line.

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Saiom Shriver 21 October 2013

quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, In 7 years you write of the mystery that fear blocks love. the glimmer becoming the fire is also very beautiful. Allah has given you your pen.

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Ryan Morris 08 December 2012

Very deep and thought provoking. Well done.

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Madina Morris 07 December 2012

Hmmm...i can tell its alot going on in this poem, maybe a little too much going on in this poem, but i love the power and beauty in your choice of words. Very nice :)

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Vipins Puthooran 06 December 2012

beautiful poem, chosen right words/ top markss! ! ! !

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Abaka Blessing Anastasia 06 December 2012

a poem 2 read over and over. nice words, powerful art piece. i love dis line 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love'', i will love 2 read more of u work.

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Valerie Dohren 04 December 2012

Deep and thought-provoking - love the last line.

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Payal Parande 04 December 2012

it is brilliant........the flow of words the well pinned lines..they are just amazing thank you for sharing sir payal

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Powerful lines and a theme well moulded into a poem.. Could have been a little longer by 6-8 more lines, I feel.Thank u for sharing.Please check ur inbox for my msg.

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Wahab Abdul 03 December 2012

very lovely poem indeed, very intense!

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Asif Andalib 03 December 2012

Lovely write. I liked it

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Nader Baheri 02 December 2012

awesome.. nice proses and flowing lines and wonderful words, used in this marvelous poem. muchas gracias for sharing~nb

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Jahan Zeb 01 December 2012

One can thing of the strength of this poem after reading it. The words sound very strong like the message of the poem. Most words are used metaphorically and that makes it interesting for the readers. Very Matured.

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Xelam Kan™ 30 November 2012

like an abstract piece of art the picture z pregnant with so many ideas, different shades and strokes enhance its beauty....... full of meaning and widen perception......... like to read this matured piece of art

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Hazel Durham 30 November 2012

A very abstract, colourful, explosion of words embracing the reader! Liked this poem!

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Muhammad Mirash 30 November 2012

i like your poem, your words giving the new meanings after every reading

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Vijay Sai R 29 November 2012

a wonderful poem......

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 November 2012

Hmm an intense poem but i admire d ambiguity. Esp liked how u say, 'burst into fire of gaiety'.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 28 November 2012

Very strong images are being expressed here, forming deep thought in life. Thanks for sharing.

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