Sunday, September 4, 2016

Beauty Of Limerick Comments

Rating: 5.0

My barren mind when lacked yield,
Started plowing outside my field,
So pleased with the click,
Beauty of limerick,
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2016

And we see the lush green field, Janab you are above all forms and formats, a true poet indeed.

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Valsa George 06 September 2016

This is exactly what I too did! Great attempt! A sure 10

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Rajnish Manga 04 September 2016

You have diversified the track for the overall benefit of the readers. This one also carries the spirit of an outstanding limerick. Thanks, Akhtar Jawd Sahab.

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Kelly Kurt 04 September 2016

You have stepped outside your field, and pleased us all.

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