Saturday, October 6, 2018

Beauty Of Descending Comments

Rating: 5.0

Finally pleasant, no doubt an adventure
I welcome when I ascend, embracing
Softer layers of earth's atmosphere
Don't enjoy, though it's really amazing.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 29 November 2018

a nice thought nicely penned, wonderful poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 October 2018

absolutely - Man is born with a complex attitude // nice poem

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narayana aghalaya 09 October 2018

a phenomenal poem! the poet in you badly misses mother earth and his dear ones; sojourn at high altitudes is just a diversion! Thanks for sharing, dear poet!

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M Asim Nehal 09 October 2018

Great feelings, the beauty of nature aptly captured and entwined with human nature....great piece.10++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 October 2018

We find beauty in everything no matter where we at. Beauty of nature is encompassing. However, the beauty of nature is more beautiful when we are with our family. A wonderful poem that brings out the best in nature Loved the last stanza. Another great twist from a great poem.10++++

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Kostas Lagos 07 October 2018

A poetic flight you have offered us! Thanks!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 06 October 2018

Beauty of descending-a beautiful eperience nicely captured.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2018

An adventure embraces the softer layers of Earth and amazes mind. Through a dutiful service a smile is drawn. Anything remained veiled is definitely very interesting. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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