Thursday, April 17, 2008

Beauty Of Death Comments

Rating: 4.3

as your breath grows hollow and thin
the hand ticks the circuit of death
awaiting the moment you leave in sin
a life not yet forgiven
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Wandering Scarlet
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Justin Unanue 11 January 2010

Ha, my mother is mostly blind, and I am mostly death, so I could relate to this poem, quite a lot. Good job.

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Katie E 29 November 2009

I like this poem a lot. Nicely written. =]

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 February 2009

Wonderful composition, like it.

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this is such a good poem, it makes you think about how wonderful death is :)

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Tyease Collins 17 May 2008

This is beautiful... you make death seem like nothing really... Good Job **Tyease**

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Gohar Sana 21 April 2008

after reading this for me you are really one of the greatest poets. Keep it up....

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John Lambremont, Sr. 17 April 2008

Excellent text, Rocco. A 9 for sure. It would appear that you are getting serious about your poetry. Although whimsy has its place, too. Note spelling 'lose' control. Keep writing!

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Helena Alvarez 17 April 2008

No words could describe how much i love this poem A job well done check some of mines out

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