Beauty Moves Comments

This piece swings along Adam. You have chosen the right metre for a description of the dance beauty makes, and it flows well. The rhymes are well thought out too, I only ask you to look carefully at the piece for one or two words need editing. Spelling even a small word incorrectly seems to jump out at the reader - you will easily overcome this I am sure because you write with flair and enthusiasm. A ten from me. Besg wishes Fay.

a poet of amazing talent. brilliant work, kinda reminds me of james wright. keep on posting!