Friday, December 22, 2017

Beauty Lies Comments

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Fair like the winter's brow,
Wearing the makes of Cherubic's glow.
Eyes dimmed with crystal power,
Breaking through emotion like man-power.
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Joshua Adeyemi
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Mahtab Bangalee 22 January 2020

beautiful poem penned, thanks for sharing///truth is beauty wherever it goes whenever; on the battle filed it never down it head; it never hideout its beautiful body; it never lies and fears on the scaffold of death; it never flee away from the death angel of cruelty; on and in the self icon this truth is truthful beauty//////

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Egbebi Mariam 28 August 2018

Wow! what a nice a poem from an intelligent writer, keep it up

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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

owo- Physiognomy embroided with smiles, Taking different eyes on mile. Teeth tinted with glorious scales, Where joy and happiness lay. lovely writings great 10++++

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Akhtar Jawad 08 April 2018

Speaks not of beauty in true: Beauty is an heart with many virtue. at the moment I feel beauty of this beautiful poem.

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Ramesh T A 04 March 2018

Beauty is truth! It reminds of Keats! Interesting composition to read! All the best!

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Joshua Adeyemi 04 March 2018

Thanks Poet. For the good comment. Joshua.

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Rajendran Muthiah 16 January 2018

An excellent concluding line! 'Beauty is a heart with many virtues! '. You explain the concept of beauty more clearly than that of Keats, our forefather did a few centuries back.

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Joshua Adeyemi 16 January 2018

Thanks for the kind words poet...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 December 2017

Adeyemi, such a good poem👍👍👍

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Joshua Adeyemi 22 December 2017

'Adeyemi'..... Thanks for the good comment...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 December 2017

Adeyemo, such a good poem👍👍👍

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Joshua Adeyemi 22 December 2017

'Adeyemi'.... Thanks for the kind words..

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